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So long and thanks for all the fish

As mentioned before, those bubbles are weird. It's got this weird thin line around them which makes it look really artificial and bevelled. Just take a look at some bubbles on Google and notice how they all reflect mirror images. It's a terrific composition and the fish itself is pretty, which says a lot from someone who is scared to dead of fish.

Also, goddamn, why do we need a Star Rating >: (

From the moment I met her I knew she meant trouble

Nice image in terms of idea/composition. I only suggest you take a second look at the hand, and some of the shading on the face. The way the water pours off her clothes is great, but I take that due to time constraints, the drips on the ground are a bit rushed.

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It's an off picture in terms off placement and composition. It's all over the place, but then again, there's these random empty places. There certainly are some VERY interesting ideas going on, such as the left-down fish and the way how the upper monster's eyes stand. I don't get the lightblue thing on the right.

Shading should also be consistent, it would be nice to see the simplistic style and lightning you use in the left-down fish constant in the entire image.

Felis responds:

Yeah, funny thing about the shading, I actually forgot how I did it after I did the first one. I don't know how or why.

Thanks for critic.

Rebuttal

Yet again, you make an amazing drawing. Downright great expression and I love the drips blending in with the character itself. I have but 1 point of critique: the left arm seems a bit long.

A 10 because you give the most amazing blow-jobs.

TurkeyOnAStick responds:

The arms are meant to be long :P

I CAUGHT YOU IN MY ART TRAP

Oranje boven (in de zolder, waar niemand kijkt :3)

This is without a doubt really nicely done, but it just doesn't tickle my style-bone the right way. You kind of got lazy on the tail, I think.

The simplistic water-splashes and bubbles are downright great.

J-qb responds:

I put more time and effort in the tail than in any other part of the drawing; I just couldnt get it to look right, so I decided to just go for the plain tail I have now. Thanks for the review

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There seem to be some perspective problems here. The footsteps suggest a downwards movement, but the sand doesn't change in volume. The water pretty much is an overview shot without depth.

I like the lines in the waves.

Luwano responds:

I messed that up on the footstep part. I wanted them to "go away" from the viewer but overdid it. Thanks for you review!

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I don't like how you did the water. It seems kinda out of place and blurry in contrast to the girl. Still love your cross-hatching as lightning/shades tho.

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As it is a good pic, it does have some weird line-work. It's hard to explain, really. In this kind of picture, the lines should be smooth as silk, in here, they look a bit jagged and wonky sometimes. Especially the tail has this problem.

The right hand is looking odd as well.

Peglay responds:

The lines are shitty because it was drawn in Flash with a mouse in less then 15min
:P

Friday Jooooones

I just love the way how you integrated the "Friday Flood" logo, and of course the drawing itself is great. I honestly can't give many critique, it looks pretty great.
The left leg of the girl getting choked does looks odd. I know it's supposed to be bended, but it is so wide and short, it looks as if it got amputated. The knee lies lower.

Good job though :3

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That's quite a wicked thing you got going on. The main thing that annoys me though is the background. That plain, bright red just isn't good. You need a texture or at least some form of subtle gradient. The "Friday Flood" logo also didn't have to be all blurry and fit in the picture. You could've stuck it in the right-hand corner with a black outline, which is more subtle.

Lastly, I suggest you work on colouring some more. The balloons look odd against the hellish red and the cats lack any form of shading.

The basic drawings of the characters are good though. Especially the top one looks rad ^^

Dieter Theuns @DieterTheuns

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