DieterTheuns's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Three Girls Under a Fat Ass]

oh dear god it's happened. The unscouted section is turning into deviantart.

Simply don't do ANY of this weird fetish shit, it's ugly as hell.

GreyScarborough responds:

I don't give a fuck.

[Different eyes]

Or it could just be a great drawing that the artist made out of no ideology or symbolism what so ever, farnayway.

linda-mota responds:

I really like everyone's interpretation. Each interpretation gives an insight into the veiwer's own thought process. It's really interesting.

[girl n' fukin glowin shit idk]

She's got a broken neck, a doofus anime expression and the Dutch angled composition is making me sick. The use of colour is a tad bright, but I can live with that if that's your thing. It's not horrendous, but kinda loud and dumb.

Also, fuck you, UndeadFrostWraith. Your review is not just worthless, you're degrading graphic artists to your personal porn providers everywhere.

Speedo responds:

im dutch

[Painting Knife experiment]

Good god, man. That's pretty damn beautiful. Love the shading and colours in the face and he cuts make a nice finishing touch.

Got a new guy to follow :D

DonStracci responds:

Thanks for your interrest!

[I didnt finish in time]

SHIVER MAH TIMBERS SHIVER MAH SOUL, YOHODIHO!

I'll try to review this, ignoring the fact it being unfinished.

It looks a bit messy. Often I cannot tell what lines connect to what. The hands look odd and a bit too uncanny/realistic. The left arm is downright wrong. The paint marks on the edges look hastily done with all the hooks and strong edges or the overly fluid parts that make it look a bit too vector-ish for being a splatter.

I really like the background below his waist.

Ashman responds:

well at least you liked something

[The Rabbit and the Heart]

oh what beautiful things I'll wear

Let's see here, you've gotten quite some critique already. I think the main problem here is the lack of a basic idea. In itself, the picture is quite boring: a simple white rabbit next to a clichéd heart-shape in a boring point of view. Even the colours feel bland. Using pixel-art is not an excuse to draw things from the side, nor is drawing with a mouse.
There also seem to be issues with the bunny itself, weird front legs, shading, the weird second ear that doesn't seem to fit it's profile stance.

Before you draw your picture, may I suggest you draw an actual picture first, even if it isn't any good? Just to hand YOURSELF a base of what you are planning. "Is this an interesting image?"

EventHorizon responds:

you're right about the flaws of this picture, but it's the most I could do, I definitely wanted to participate in this event (because I love the rabbits) and I was able to come out this piece of art even if not the best, I will try to improve.

[Bunbun]

brown?tuskfnl

Well, not much to say which hasn't been said really. It a-dow-a-bool, and the only true problem I see is his left ear which seems oddly placed. Pretty damn great logo and a nice starter for this flood :3

J-qb responds:

TUSKfNL!

[Friday Flood]

M... Mr Frosty? Could you put down that gun? : <

Love the contrast of the soft background to the harsh line-work and shades of the snowman. Seeing and comparing the lightning, the face should have some parts being darker, even black completely, such as the base of the nose and the teeth. Good job!

Fifty-50 responds:

Yup, cant complain there. I'll keep that in mind next time. :P

[Snow Scene - Friday Flood 4]

D'awww

It's adorable and simplistic. You could have added more objects, but then again, it's probably for the best to keep everything in small doses here. Great work and have a big yellow star-shaped sticker for your original solution ^^

Luwano responds:

I was thinking whether I should add more or not. There was a little snowman ready to enter the scene, but it was really tiny, smaller than the bench and that looked really strange.

Hooray for big yellow star-shaped stickers! Thanks!

[Deep sea lurker]

Ringo No Uta

It's all a bit blurry, and many of the lights don't convince me. For an image that completely supports on the use of light it's not a very good one, I'm afraid.

In your image, light shines from above, right on it's head, which doesn't make any sense since we're deep underwater. The only lights should be coming from the holes. You could've played with those for some cool effects.

I like its mouth, don't be angry :3

Havegum responds:

I'm not angry, I'm glad there's someone to point out flaws in which I hadn't noticed myself!
But yeah, I agree with the lights not making sense. Thanks for the review!
Happy friday flood!