DieterTheuns's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Loloctopus]

Octoroktocockpus

What a schmexy octopus. I think this image would've been better off without all the rest of this stuff, such as the 3 extra icons, olive and ice-cube. Just a clean, drawn image in the center was enough to win me over.

Fifty-50 responds:

Lol, next time I won't make so cluttered. Thanks for reviewing!

[Friday Flood 3]

Ayhekjdfgbsikzml

It's an off picture in terms off placement and composition. It's all over the place, but then again, there's these random empty places. There certainly are some VERY interesting ideas going on, such as the left-down fish and the way how the upper monster's eyes stand. I don't get the lightblue thing on the right.

Shading should also be consistent, it would be nice to see the simplistic style and lightning you use in the left-down fish constant in the entire image.

Felis responds:

Yeah, funny thing about the shading, I actually forgot how I did it after I did the first one. I don't know how or why.

Thanks for critic.

[Friday Flood #3!]

Rebuttal

Yet again, you make an amazing drawing. Downright great expression and I love the drips blending in with the character itself. I have but 1 point of critique: the left arm seems a bit long.

A 10 because you give the most amazing blow-jobs.

TurkeyOnAStick responds:

The arms are meant to be long :P

I CAUGHT YOU IN MY ART TRAP

[Kingfisher]

Oranje boven (in de zolder, waar niemand kijkt :3)

This is without a doubt really nicely done, but it just doesn't tickle my style-bone the right way. You kind of got lazy on the tail, I think.

The simplistic water-splashes and bubbles are downright great.

J-qb responds:

I put more time and effort in the tail than in any other part of the drawing; I just couldnt get it to look right, so I decided to just go for the plain tail I have now. Thanks for the review

[Green Flash]

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There seem to be some perspective problems here. The footsteps suggest a downwards movement, but the sand doesn't change in volume. The water pretty much is an overview shot without depth.

I like the lines in the waves.

Luwano responds:

I messed that up on the footstep part. I wanted them to "go away" from the viewer but overdid it. Thanks for you review!

[Cat!]

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As it is a good pic, it does have some weird line-work. It's hard to explain, really. In this kind of picture, the lines should be smooth as silk, in here, they look a bit jagged and wonky sometimes. Especially the tail has this problem.

The right hand is looking odd as well.

Peglay responds:

The lines are shitty because it was drawn in Flash with a mouse in less then 15min
:P

[robot day part 2 robo chick]

[Review]

Let's start off with the obvious. Explain to me; why are her tits so gigantic and in profile when her back is clearly towards us and why in Xenu's sake does an armour need nipples?

The backdrop is screwing the entire drawing up. It's a low quality photo with some crappy brush you found on the internet slapped right onto it. The details on the right-hand are neat and the face is simplistic but very nice. Too bad the gun is a bit sloppy. Also, the hairs need shading.

dommi-fresh responds:

ok then lets see.
1. her tits are so huge because if you have ever seen robocop the movie his chest is also huge and ridiculous. plus you'd be surprised how many people like boobs on this site.
2. her armour need nipple for kicks. if this robochick was rebuilt by a bunch of nerdy scientists then of course they are going to add that feature during the armour process.
3. i agree with you on the back ground it sucks and i hate it.
4. the whole style is supposed to be scratchy and sketchy but hey if you don't like the gun thats cool. its your opinion.